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Cardboard_Spaghetti

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                                                Posted: Wed, 09/08/2023 22:40                                                (2 Years ago)
                                            

This is just an art dump for my pokeheroes fanart (so far have one ^^')

I'll be adding more in the future. I would love some critique too!

Anyway, here's a Leah!

"The voices tell me I should carry on"

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                                                Posted: Wed, 09/08/2023 22:44                                                (2 Years ago)
                                            

Hi there, I'm also a fellow artist in PH, and here are a few things I think you missed out. Leah's a girl right? So the hips should have a small type of curve to it, and where is your light located at? The color shading depends on where your light source is. (not saying this in a bad way, but you asked for critique, so I guess here?)

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Cardboard_Spaghetti

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                                                Posted: Wed, 09/08/2023 22:45                                                (2 Years ago)
                                            

Thank you! I'll work on that right now!

Is this better?

"The voices tell me I should carry on"

Everglades

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                                                Posted: Thu, 10/08/2023 18:53                                                (2 Years ago)
                                            

Can I give some feedback too?

The light is a lil bit awkward, with just one big yellow strip and nothing else. I'd either put that layer on overlay or gradient the yellow

"𝓓𝓸 𝔂𝓸𝓾 𝓴𝓷𝓸𝔀, 𝓭𝓸 𝔂𝓸𝓾 𝓴𝓷𝓸𝔀, 𝔀𝓱𝓪𝓽 𝓲𝓽'𝓼 𝓵𝓲𝓴𝓮 𝓽𝓸 𝓭𝓲𝓮 𝓪𝓵𝓲𝓿𝓮?
𝓦𝓱𝓮𝓷 𝓪 𝔀𝓸𝓻𝓵𝓭 𝓽𝓱𝓪𝓽 𝓸𝓷𝓮 𝓱𝓪𝓭 𝓬𝓸𝓵𝓸𝓻 𝓯𝓪𝓭𝓮𝓼 𝓽𝓸 𝔀𝓱𝓲𝓽𝓮 𝓪𝓷𝓭 𝓰𝓻𝓪𝔂 𝓪𝓷𝓭 𝓫𝓵𝓪𝓬𝓴;
𝔀𝓱𝓮𝓷 𝓽𝓸𝓶𝓸𝓻𝓻𝓸𝔀 𝓽𝓮𝓻𝓻𝓲𝓯𝓲𝓮𝓼 𝔂𝓸𝓾 𝓫𝓾𝓽 𝔂𝓸𝓾'𝓵𝓵 𝓭𝓲𝓮 𝓲𝓯 𝔂𝓸𝓾 𝓵𝓸𝓸𝓴 𝓫𝓪𝓬𝓴?"
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