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The Everything Arts Club (Accepting!)
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i made a hypno character this time! :000


Petunia is a sassy, flamboyant grumpy lil' thing. She's always tired, and usually in a bad mood. She's passionate about one thing, though, and that's nature. She usually hikes out into the forest and comes back with a collection of trinkets; most of which are usually bells. She a d o r e s bells to death, and loves putting them on herself, somewhere. She's also very smol. Imagine the size of a Civet. Got it? Good. That's how big she is. She prefers to stand on two legs, but will walk on four from time to time.
She drinks a l o t of Coke-o-Cola, and well...secretly enjoys watching you struggle. :'3
I'd LOVE any art of Tune (yes she already has a nickname), and any criticism is gladly accepted! (alsoiapologizeforhorribleanatomythisismyfirsttimedrawinghypno)

Oops. Look what I did.
Anything I could do better?
If you can't handle harsh opinions kinda, i would not click the spoiler. Just a warning!

You ignored the spoiler? I see.
The lines are messy, straight up messy. The colors go into the lines which irretates me. Do you use layers? If not, do. Its a whole lot easier.
The shading is good, especially on the hair, i will give you that. The pink on the ears are not good, again, messy lines.
The lines itself is also messy, not covering the whole thing, but rather getting swallowed by the coloring! It looks not like something you used so much time on, the lines i mean. But the coloring match could also be better. Like i said, lines and coloring are collabsing over eachother.
I would give this.. 4/10. You tried, and the body structure is good, the shading is good, but the lines messy, and the colors is swallowing the lines, its bad. Just bad.
Swallowed up in opinions. Good luck.
The lines are messy, straight up messy. The colors go into the lines which irretates me. Do you use layers? If not, do. Its a whole lot easier.
The shading is good, especially on the hair, i will give you that. The pink on the ears are not good, again, messy lines.
The lines itself is also messy, not covering the whole thing, but rather getting swallowed by the coloring! It looks not like something you used so much time on, the lines i mean. But the coloring match could also be better. Like i said, lines and coloring are collabsing over eachother.
I would give this.. 4/10. You tried, and the body structure is good, the shading is good, but the lines messy, and the colors is swallowing the lines, its bad. Just bad.
Swallowed up in opinions. Good luck.
Well, I know what you're talking about. But the problem is, I can't use layers since I'm working on the common Microsoft Paint, as I already stated in my sign up form.
Anyways, thanks for the respond. I will try to make it better the next time. ^.^