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Black-AcE2
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Posted: Sun, 09/02/2014 07:36 (11 Years ago)

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Welcome welcome WELCOME!! =D

Are you crazy?
Do you feel like your 'NOT NORMAL?!'
Do you see sheep puking rainbow bunnies while reading this?
If your answer is Y-Y-YEASH!
THAN YOU BELONG IN THIS GUILD x3

~Our beloved Mascots~

The both of them are the pokemon representatives of the CRAZY PEEPS!
Have a better look at them:

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~Mississippi Queen~

~Mexiba~

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PFFFT, you thought you could join just like that?!
Well, then this guild is for chosen and invited people only =p But if you answer all the questions in the form and impress me or any one of the generals, you'll will be chosen to join this messed up place =3
If you are invited or selected, here are some things you need to look at:
1- All Poke-heroes rules apply~
2- No spamming or posting things like: "=P" only.
If you wanna be crazy than please, I insist that you do, but posting one word thingies like "=P" is no way near crazy.
3- Just don't use any bad words openly. You can cloud them using, ">@#$!<" words, okay? We don't wanna get banned, now do we? ~~Who wants to get banned?! =D being banned is fuuun~~~
5- Don't get offended by anything and report the moderators at once. Talk to our generals and tell them what's wrong ^^ ~~Talk to me for a change! D=~~
6- Contest rules are separate...They won't be mentioned here =p
7- Your gonna be facing the epicness of randomness once you join :3
8- Close the rules spoiler...
9- Seriously, just close it...
10- I can't believe you're still reading on ahead! XD
11- STOP DISOBEYING ME!! ~~actually, that's a sign of you belonging here x3~~
12- That's enough guys...stop reading...
13- Do I have to call in Queen Mississippi and Mexiba for this?!
14- Aaaaaand you're still reading...
15- This is just called wasting your time dude/dudette =p
16- I won't bother telling you to stop reading...
17- DO you like cookies?
18- PM me once in a while. I'll reply =3
19- Randomnesssss~
20- You sir, should be awarded a medal for reading all that #$@% xD

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This spoiler is dedicated to contests that will be held here in the guild ^^
Before going any further, you should be aware of the following rules:
1- You CANNOT post double entries. If there are any double entries, you'll be disqualified instantly.
2- Do NOT submit any irrelevant content or anything else that is for users who are 18+
3- Do NOT submit any work that is offensive to any tradition, religion or country. There MUST be no discrimination between the members of the guild.
4- The results will be tallied by the Leader and the Generals.
5- The prizes will be given by the leader and the Generals(It depends on whether they want to or not =p)
6- More details will be specified when a contest occurs.

The CONTESTS:
- On-going
* Winner = ???
* Started = 28th of June 2014
* Ended = 5th of July 20114
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Just copy this form out and answer the questions:

[b]1. What is the color of glass?=[/b] (your answer)
[b]2. How many eggs can an elephant lay?=[/b] (your answer)
3. [b]If a hippo flew all the way to the antartic, then how much time would be needed?=[/b] (your answer)
4. [b]Can snakes fart?=[/b] (your answer)
5. [b]How many eyes does a giraffe have?=[/b] (your answer)
6. [b]Are these questions retarded?=[/b](your answer)

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•]••´º´•» Thee leader «•´º´••[•
Blackscorpion2

]|I{•------» The generals «------•}I|[
- laurenashleigh1230
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?ll?ll? The Minionz ?ll?ll?
- CyndaquilLuvsVan_Halen
(The very first user to sign up ^^)
- Giygas
- KoinDorii
- Sylvia
- TheTardis
- Tina
- Ufimtsev
- ZorgedLikesFroakies
- Finhawk
- Lucariolite
- Ghost_Rayquaza
- ShreyashJain
- Lilwan
- Meldra
- Anubis_of_Cruelty
- SealVsGaming

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This is where all the users that went TOTALLY BERZERK end up at...This is not a good place to go. Trust me, I couldn't survive in it for ONE DAY. You will be disgraced and humiliated by the other members. Any user that breaks the rules two or maybe three times ends up here. Luckily, nobody is in this place...yet! *evil background music*
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This is a place where all the honorable Retardians go!! It features the winners of the contest and what they won. It also features all the CARAYZAYIEST people in this guild. It will be updated frequently, don't worry about it =p Your username can end up here if you prove your worth to me or any one of the generals. Make us laugh so much that we spat out our drinks every time we read your posts XD
- CyndaquilLuvsVan_Halen.
The very first user to sign up on this guild was CyndaquilLuvsVan_Halen. She deserved a spot among the crazy and most awesome retardians in the Hall of fame!!.
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Black-AcE2 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 88	Posted: Sat, 08/02/2014 18:29 (11 Years ago)
	With Rudy I chuckled and spoke in a stern voice, "You are a bad liar sister..." [Read more]

Black-AcE2 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 88	Posted: Sat, 08/02/2014 16:46 (11 Years ago)
	With Rudy I sighed and shook my head, "For you to join me, sister..." [Read more]

Black-AcE2 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 88	Posted: Sat, 08/02/2014 16:43 (11 Years ago)
	With Lucifer I nodded and sighed, "What ever you say pops..." [Read more]

Black-AcE2 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 88	Posted: Sat, 08/02/2014 16:41 (11 Years ago)
	With Lucifer I felt dad jump off me as I flew faster and sighed, "I AM NOT LETTING YOU GO SO JUST SIT!" then flew under him so that he fell on top of my back [Read more]

Black-AcE2 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 88	Posted: Sat, 08/02/2014 16:37 (11 Years ago)
	With Lucifer I only grinned and flew even faster, "Sorry dad, No can do~" and neared Jirachi inch-by-inch. [Read more]

Black-AcE2 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 88	Posted: Sat, 08/02/2014 16:22 (11 Years ago)
	With Lucifer I growled as an old pokemon flew ahead of me, "Lets see how long you can keep up like that!" and flew faster than before [Read more]

Black-AcE2 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 88	Posted: Sat, 08/02/2014 16:10 (11 Years ago)
	OOC: Maver really loves to fly on Lucifer doesn't he? XD With Lucifer I nodded and spread my wings, feeling the wind flow under them and leaping high, "So then...what next dad?" With Jirachi I chuckled and shook my head before focusing my energy, "Hope you can keep up son..." then flew through the air, passing Maver and Lucifer in the process. [Read more]

Black-AcE2 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 88	Posted: Sat, 08/02/2014 15:51 (11 Years ago)
	I looked at both the pokemon weirdly and sighed, "Whats the plan?" then glared at Wave, "And you, get me some breakfast" [Read more]

Black-AcE2 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 88	Posted: Sat, 08/02/2014 14:18 (11 Years ago)
	I helped Flare get up and smiled at her, "Ya know...your cute when your all apologetic, so don't worry about a thing...I'll always be here to protect you!" [Read more]

Black-AcE2 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 88	Posted: Sat, 08/02/2014 14:06 (11 Years ago)
	With Lucifer I was a little disappointed after seeing the lack of trust in grand-dad, "Come on! I am the best dragon-type flyer there is!" With Jirachi I shook my head and frowned, "It's just that I am more comfortable on my own..." Then looked at Maver, "You go on ahead, I shall meet you outside!" [Read more]

Black-AcE2 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 88	Posted: Sat, 08/02/2014 13:59 (11 Years ago)
	I perked my head up and ran out there as fast as I could. Outside, Queen what-ever had grabbed Flare by the neck, which in turn made my blood boil, "LET GO OF HER!" I then came at her using volt-tackle, "Flare, come on! You can do it!" [Read more]

Black-AcE2 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 88	Posted: Sat, 08/02/2014 12:34 (11 Years ago)
	I was shocked as Flare ran out-side then looked at Wave, "Is she always like that?" [Read more]

Black-AcE2 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 88	Posted: Sat, 08/02/2014 12:22 (11 Years ago)
	I grunted and forced Myself out of the sheets, "Y a know it's a darn good thing that your cute Flare, otherwise, I would've eaten you by now.." [Read more]

Black-AcE2
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Forum Posts: 88

Posted: Sat, 08/02/2014 11:58 (11 Years ago)

I stood there watching what Krickey was doing, with my mouth wide open. Meloetta turned around to see what happened and had the same expression as I did, "How the hell can a creature with such tiny wings even lift a pokemon that big?!" Meleotta dragged me by the ear with an annoyed expression on her face. In my opinion, she was trying to tell me: "Since when did the world of pokemon make sense?!" I frowned as she let go of my ear and motioned to run away.

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Black-AcE2 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 88	Posted: Sat, 08/02/2014 11:02 (11 Years ago)
	With Lucifer I wagged my tail sideways like a loyal growlithe and looked at Jirachi, who was being stubborn about getting on top of my back. With Jirachi Could I really trust that hyper little boy? "Maver...is it safe?" [Read more]

Black-AcE2
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Forum Posts: 88

Posted: Fri, 07/02/2014 17:10 (11 Years ago)

I am definitely not a very big fan of Doctor.Who, nor do I know anything about this show, but what I do know is how to criticize :3 (Trust me, I love this job XD)
Blackscorpion2 is now ready to give you a full report of what he thought of this story so far >_< (please don't get offended, I really go over board with the constructive criticism)
~The review:
The first thing that I was able to distinguish about your work is the great expression. You really put your all into it and it really is appreciated by many of the more experienced writers. Your plot development is steady but then again, it lacks sophistication and bit more plot twists. If you could only lengthen your writing and add tad bit more details about the main story, it may reach the level at which people will be trapped as they further read this Fanfiction. You are really precise with the information regarding the different characters on the show, and like Finhawk has stated before, I really haven't dealt with any OOC problems :)

New-readers, or people who have started to know about the show expect more wonders from it. Let us not forget, your work reflects on how the show really is(so far, I have started watching the first few episodes of the series XD) As a critic, I have read many good and well written fanfictions and yours is qualified enough to become one of them, but, there comes the matter of it's length. It really has me disappointed, you could've added most of the details from all the different chapter's in one if you had the chance. Grammar Nazi's would've caught many mistakes right now, but being a more safer person, I'll only advise you to spice up your writing by adding more advanced wordings and expressions such as:
- Similes & metaphors
- Phrases and old sayings
- Quizzing sentences and onomatopoeia
- Advanced and unexpected plot twists.
These will intrigue the reader to not dare scroll back up and eventually urge him to beg for more ;)
Then again, this is only an option, It is your choice whether you chose to follow these points or not. Your work is, from the start till now one of the few fanfictions that really caught my attention and has a unique idea, these point's will further enlighten your work.
Great job with it and hope you do an even greater job ;)

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Black-AcE2 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 88	Posted: Fri, 07/02/2014 15:35 (11 Years ago)
	With Jirachi I was dumb founded by Arceus's behavior, "Well that escalated quickly..." With Lucifer I grinned and looked at both of them before saying, "All aboard for the flying dragon express~~!" [Read more]

Black-AcE2 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 88	Posted: Fri, 07/02/2014 15:27 (11 Years ago)
	With Lucifer I smiled mischievously and narrowed my eyes at dad, "Ya know...I think I remember you wanting a girlfriend before Rudy was free~" With Jirachi I smirked and joined Lucifer, "Oh~ Sounds like someone wants to be in a relationship~ what kind of females do you like?" I laughed along with Lucifer and looked at Arceus afterwards, "We can ask help from Arceus..." [Read more]

Black-AcE2 OFFLINE Forum Posts: 88	Posted: Fri, 07/02/2014 15:21 (11 Years ago)
	With Lucifer I perked my head up and jumped instantly, full of energy, "ARE YA KIDIN'?! I WAS BORN TO FLY~" With Jirachi I shook my head as Lucifer was done with his sudden outburst, "You there son are a fine example of a 'CHARISMATIC'..." [Read more]

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