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The Writers of Poke-Heros
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Posted: Sun, 07/08/2016 01:22 (7 Years ago)
Rulez:
*PH rules apply! (No spamming, double posting, yadayada...)
*Must have good English! You don't need perfect spelling and grammar, but try your best!
*No sensitive topics mentioned in the writing you show to us!
*I will make a mod forum interview thingy when the club has enough people. (I would like at least 5)
*This club is for any skill level, we are all going to learn from each other here, so no rude feedback, make it helpful!
*Have lots of fun, and show your writing talent!
Forum!
Username:
How often are you online?: (Ex. "I'm on from morning to noon PH time on week days, but I'm not online on weekends)
Sample writing:
Why do you want to join the Writers of Poke-Heroes?:
Posted: Sun, 07/08/2016 01:42 (7 Years ago)
How often are you online?: Almost always, soon probably not in the early mornings or late nights.
Sample writing: Claire woke up to the sun beaming from her pale face. Clare opened her almond brown eyes, and put her hand in front of her face to shade her face from the iridescent light. She slopped out of her soft white bed, and began to tease her hair with her black comb, careful to be gentle at her split ends. Claire grunted as she slid downstairs, scratching her eyes and butt. "CREEK! CRACK!" the stairs howled as the petite child's white feet patted each step. (END)
Why do you want to join the Writers of Poke-Heroes?: I have always loved writing, so I thought it would be cool to share my ideas here :)
Posted: Sun, 07/08/2016 01:58 (7 Years ago)
Posted: Sun, 07/08/2016 13:58 (7 Years ago)
How often are you online?: (Ex. "I'm on from morning to noon PH time on week days, but I'm not online on weekends): from 6:30 to 8:00, with some gaps in between.
Sample writing:
The hungry bear lumbered through the forest, eventually coming across a stream, he put his left paw in, and pulled out a salmon to eat. He ate the salmon silently. The bear, still hungry, put his right paw in, and pulled out a salmon. The bear ate the salmon, and, now full, left the stream, lumbering throuh the forest.
(End.)
Why do you want to join the Writers of Poke-Heroes?: I don't know.
Posted: Sun, 07/08/2016 14:18 (7 Years ago)
Posted: Sun, 07/08/2016 15:03 (7 Years ago)
How often are you online?: Im atleast on everyday, its mixed between the times though. But mostly 14:00 server time and onwards.
Sample writing: My eyes were twitching as i looked up on the dog, who had greeted me. But i was scared of dogs. The devilish eyes, looking directly into my soul. Its spit from its tounge, hitting my shocked face. The owner finally got it off me, took me up, and patted me on the shoulder. Was this the excuse i got, for having my worst fear, in my face? The owner left, with their dog walking besides them. I looked down at my fist. I couldn't do anything. The dog had won.
Why do you want to join the Writers of Poke-Heroes?: I have always loved making my small stories, and overall writing. I find it intresting that other people share the same interest, and it would be fun to see other people's ideas.
Posted: Sun, 07/08/2016 15:14 (7 Years ago)
Posted: Sun, 07/08/2016 17:35 (7 Years ago)
Username: glaceonthegreat
How often are you online?: pokehero night on wwekdays,pokehero days on weekends.
Sample writing: I layed in the cold cage."how could humans do this to use,We are living too..."I mumbled. The door opened with a squeak."There She is"said a voice.another said "ill give you 25k for her"
Why do you want to join the Writers of Poke-Heroes?: so i can learn to be a better writer,and know what people think if my writing.
Posted: Sun, 07/08/2016 17:37 (7 Years ago)
I will just accept you, and we can fix that! :D
Posted: Sun, 07/08/2016 17:42 (7 Years ago)
Posted: Sun, 07/08/2016 17:44 (7 Years ago)
Posted: Sun, 07/08/2016 18:10 (7 Years ago)
A dark blue square pattern greeted me when i hatched from my egg, it broke into pieces and vanished. I was a new hatched Charmander, bred from a special Defensive mother, and a Special Attack father. I looked over at the other five eggs near me, unhatched. Each had a different pattern, some were blocky, others were circulair. I was curious, and hugged the nearest egg, warming it up. I then realized that there was some other squares, down in the right corner, they were black, with white text. The one who caught my attention the most was 'Hunt stuff' and as i looked down at the white text, a arrow grapped me. Swinging me down in there. Where i saw hundreds of Charmander's like myself! I looked back up where my fellow eggs were last time. But no, there was some white text now. 'Party'.
I would love to see people's opinion.
Posted: Sun, 07/08/2016 18:25 (7 Years ago)
By TheBritishVivillon
A small Pichu hatched out of a small egg, "Pi! Pichu!" He said happily. He looked around, and saw many more Pichu and Pikachu, and five or six Raichu, playing in a prairie, all of which were happy, and were enjoying themselves. The Pichu wandered around, playing with the other Pichu. The Pichu I'm talking about was called Bob. Bob played with the other Pichu, and all of a sudden, for a reason unknown, he evolved into a Pikachu. "Pika?" He asked, all the Pichu looked at Bob as if he was a freak, and told him to go away. Tears welled up in Bob's eyes, and he went to play with the Pikachu, who accepted him... a similar thing happened, while the Pikachu were looking for rocks, Bob found a thunder stone, he fiddled with it, and all of a sudden, he evolved into Raichu. "Rai?" He asked, the Pikachu looked at Bob as if he were a freak, and once again, he went to play with the Raichu, the Raichu accepted him, and they played. Eventually, he met a Raichu named Sarah. He loved Sarah, and Sarah loved Bob back. Then they had a kid, and the cycle repeats.
Posted: Sun, 07/08/2016 18:29 (7 Years ago)
@TheBritishVivillion
Very cute story, but I think more action should be in between the evolutions. How does he suddenly evolve?
Posted: Sun, 07/08/2016 18:29 (7 Years ago)
Posted: Sun, 07/08/2016 18:34 (7 Years ago)
Who needs a pond, when you can have an ocean,
Who needs friends, where you are closer to others and,
Who needs a flower, when you can have a garden,
Who needs a small store, when you can have a supermarket,
Who needs sun, when you have warm hugs?
Who needs enemies, when you can have love.
Fin.
@Popplio: loved the story! Its so detailed!
@TheBritishVivillon: Try to be more creative, bit I thought it was good overall!
Posted: Sun, 07/08/2016 18:53 (7 Years ago)
Bit meh? I expected the feels from this story, but i got none. The Pichu tearing up everytime just began to irritate me instead than me feeling sorry. Its very hard to hit that special place of the feels. I talk from expierence.
@Lillypie beautiful :o
I made another quick story. This time, its a finished products.
I was hatched from an egg, and could feel warm paws over my head. As i raised my head to see an Espeon who's fur was beautiful and reflected in the sunlight, to an Umbreon, who's tail was fluffy so you could fall asleep when you touched it. The Umbreon said something to the Espeon, something about me. I was tired, after working on getting out of the void, known as egg. The Espeon suddenly laughed, and picked me up in my ear. I tilted my head as it threw me down when we where in a house. I could feel the floor under me. I nodded to them, and a human came in. Probably a teen. He threw carefully a red device at me, and soon i was inside paradise. I was captured. As he left me out again with probably my parents, he left. But i could hear his words as he left. "Defensive Umbreon, here we go."
Posted: Sun, 07/08/2016 18:58 (7 Years ago)
Posted: Sun, 07/08/2016 19:01 (7 Years ago)
@Popplio
What is happening? STAY CLEAR!
I wake up, looking up, and down. I see some figures around me, and some glass, separating me, encapsulating me, in a small area.. I look at my hands, traded for yellow stubs. I feel small. I touch the top of my head, and feel 2 little "things". I feel fine fur on my body, nothing like my usual tan skin. I look at myself though the glass, when the scientist were done fogging it up, observing me. I saw, I was a Chingaling.
How is it?
Posted: Sun, 07/08/2016 19:03 (7 Years ago)
I was born an shiny Absol.I grew up always hearing "Your better than normal Absol" I asked "why?" But only got one ansore,"Your shiny!" I didnt understand why that made me cool,but I seemed to be a popular at school,so I just went with it.I became the mean girl at school.I began likeing it.Then he moved into my naborhood.I began likeing him,finally i confessed"I like you".He replyed back"I dont like mean,snotty,and jurkey pokemon."and left.I yelled "Wait!I can change!"
He didnt accept me.So,I became enemys with him.Then he moved again.I realized he could have been mine,if only I wasnt such a Jurk.I regret it to this day,but its too late now...so i live a life of misery.I think to myself all the time "Why was I such a Jurk..."
Popplio: nice detail!
ThebritishVivillon: it needs a little more detail,but great story!
Lilly pie: Great,just great!